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Well, the eltor are now described. Why weren't they earlier? Why leave the reader unable to envision a fantasy creature?
You lose points for shit like that.
It's amazing how comfortable these city kids are on horseback. And how they don't miss things like bathrooms.
And they don't seem at all surprised that everyone speaks English!!
More points lost.